Weak willed man, struggling to survive in the suburbs of London, life going downhill, marriage failing. Family (wife and son) kidnapped by drug dealing gang to whom he owes money. Sent pieces of his family in the post until he pays ransom yet he is unable to pay it back. Begs gang to have mercy on him and to find another way for him to repay his debt. Gang set him a hit list of targets to kill for them to get his family back. He does this for them but they kill his family, leading him to embark on a murderous rampage with his new found bloodlust, killing at random but covering his tracks until he is finally caught.
Certainly an improvement Milo, now you need to think about where you might film this, and the actors as well. It would be difficult for a teenager to play in an adult sequence. Think about motives in the plot (i.e why the gang would kill the girlfriend anyway), and think about how we would be able to film this with minimal budget. x
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